Sunday, March 22, 2009

my first attempt !

Was passing by the ghat,
saw the beauty which soon filled my heart.
the soil and the green trees,
looked just so perfect as we fleed.
The sun was perfect along with clouds,
which shaded the mountains and its peaks,
the sight was so amazing "Even HE must be proud",
must have been poured from that birds beak.
No sooner arrived the new friends,
and there disappeared the rays that sun sends.
The sight became disturbing ,
was dark .silent , scary which was deepening.
the green was now slave to black,
that charm and beauty all were now lacked.
It seems so permanent,
but still was only for that moment.
This os what says Mother....(Nature),
and indicates us to bother,
that smiles and frowns get altered,
so not to get carried away by either.
It seems so permanent,
but will always be again only for a moment.

2 comments:

poonamshah said...

most spontaneous flow thoughts ... after this i enjoyed writing :)

Merup Kapadia said...

good analogy, it must be read full to understand the real meaning of it...
first attempt are always precious...